{"id":1892,"date":"2017-09-23T14:17:18","date_gmt":"2017-09-23T14:17:18","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/edmundprestwich.co.uk\/?p=1892"},"modified":"2017-09-23T16:41:02","modified_gmt":"2017-09-23T16:41:02","slug":"review-the-occupant-by-jane-draycott","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/edmundprestwich.co.uk\/?p=1892","title":{"rendered":"Review – The Occupant by Jane Draycott"},"content":{"rendered":"

The Occupant<\/em> by Jane Draycott. Carcanet Press, 64 pp. \u00a39.99<\/p>\n

These quietly beautiful, profoundly unsettling poems neither present puzzles nor tell you what to think; they ask you to dwell on them and in them imaginatively, letting their resonances and suggestions accumulate in your mind. This is made a pleasure by their formal grace. Phrase by phrase, they make clear, vivid, evocative statements, but as wholes they resist resolving into settled impressions or rounding off into paraphrasable conclusions. Each is charged with hidden depths, elliptical connections and startling changes of tack. They take you on long journeys in a few words. Resisting closure, they stay hauntingly alive in the mind.<\/p>\n

In \u201cProspect\u201d, for example, the first eight lines evoke an archetypal refugee crisis:<\/p>\n

Anyone who wanted to could leave, could gather
\n…<\/span>shivering on the south side of the river,
\nlabelled and provided for with socks and sweaters
\n…<\/span>and a little cash. We walked across the water
\nin our thousands and left behind for ever
\n…<\/span>all that was great: the monuments and sewers,
\ncathedrals, theatres, mothers, lovers, brothers
\n…<\/span>as the flames licked at the city\u2019s raging heart.<\/p>\n

Vivid, moving, and sensitively alive as that is, what really makes the poem is the way the next six lines take us in a completely unexpected direction: \u201cFaced with the prospect of living forever, \/ we headed for the country lanes together.\u201d \u201cWe\u201d are now refugees from mortality itself, and the poem suggests that this may mean being refugees from life: \u201cWe had left behind forever \/ all that we had loved. It was a start\u201d. Rereading the octave, \u201cthe river\u201d takes on a new metaphorical suggestiveness (the river Styx?) as does the idea of walking across water. The poem was apparently inspired by a medical conference suggesting the possibility of living forever. It seems to breathe scepticism about the desirability of doing so, inviting us to meditate on the intimate relations of love, loss and death.<\/p>\n

This is a recurring theme and gives the book a great deal of its emotional depth. We find it again in the sonnet \u201cLost\u201d. Deeply rooted in Draycott\u2019s own imagination and strongly connected to a number of poems in her earlier books, \u201cLost\u201d develops around the situation of Hermione in Shakespeare\u2019s The Winter\u2019s Tale<\/em>, and around various hints in Keats. Revolving paradoxical\u00a0 ideas of loss and recovery (\u201cyou are a girl again \u2013 lost, so it seems \/ like everything\u201d) it links them to the relations of mother and child in a way that echoes several of Draycott\u2019s other poems. Returning to life after a sleep like a Russian winter, the speaker says \u201cThe wonder is the waking world \/ is so much like the dream.\u201d This reminds us of Keats\u2019 famous statement that \u201cThe imagination may be compared to Adam’s dream, – he awoke and found it truth\u201d, and reflects the symbiotic intertwining of truth and the imagination in Draycott\u2019s writing. She has a gift for making the world strange in a way that cleanses our perceptions and opens our imaginations to thoughts and feelings that can strike with almost visionary intensity and that do feel like revelations of truth from new angles, rather than like simple fantasy.<\/p>\n

A striking example is the eerily beautiful \u201cLent\u201d, which is again about the acceptance of loss, and which culminates in a stunning display of the imagination\u2019s power. At the start, incongruous fields of discourse are skilfully interwoven and set reacting against each other:<\/p>\n

The bailiff winds are at the door.
\nAlcohol and cigarettes must go. Abstain,
\nrepent. No meat, no chocolate, no more
\nobsessive checking of your phone
\nlike the pulse of a dying friend, refrain.<\/p>\n

The simile in line five is as explosively strange as Eliot\u2019s comparison of evening to a patient etherized upon a table. Remarkably, however, this powerful image doesn\u2019t overwhelm or trivialize evocations of the homely, secularized version of giving things up for Lent, which I think is a testimony to Draycott\u2019s sensitive humanity. Particular renunciations culminate in a universal renunciation that is an acceptance of the inevitability of change \u2013 \u201cLet the world go like Michelangelo\u2019s sculpture \/ made of snow.\u201d After all this, the sestet opens with the house, the frame of our life, become utterly strange, wide open to the forces that blow on and through it, and freed from limitation to a particular time by a magically evocative touch of archaism in the language: \u201cThe house lies purged and empty. Still the winds blow\u201d. The really unsettling twist and the moment that feels like a visionary revelation comes when Draycott tells us to renounce renunciation itself and think of a snow sculpture made by Michelangelo:<\/p>\n

Retreat instead to that windless winter morning
\nwhen a young man stood in the gardens of the palazzo,
\nlips glistening, hair shining at the nape
\nbefore the bomb-blast of sun, not anyone\u2019s to keep.<\/p>\n

This is stunning because of the way it simultaneously embraces the inevitability of loss and resists or transfigures it by imagination. The very words that crystallize the glistening, inanimate form of the snow-sculpture simultaneously create the completely opposite image of a youth carnally, almost violently alive.<\/p>\n

Setting opposites interacting is fundamental to Draycott\u2019s approach, and here we also have the clash between windless stillness and the bomb-blast of sun. Almost any poem might illustrate this pervasive technique, but a very clear-cut example is three short sentences at the end of \u201cThe Stare\u201d presenting three contradictory similes for a fantasy of how the blinding moonlight of a night in Moscow might climb into the writer\u2019s hotel room and carry her off: \u201cIt\u2019ll be like a giant\u2019s delicate hand. \/ It\u2019ll be like a winged horse ride. \/ It\u2019ll be like a police searchlight.\u201d<\/p>\n

Three story-worlds \u2013 at least \u2013 in a mere twenty words. That kind of verbal economy and imaginative richness makes poem after poem a source of artistic and human delight.<\/p>\n

I would like to thank Patricia Oxley for permission to reprint this review, which appeared in Acumen 88.<\/p>\n

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