{"id":1735,"date":"2016-05-20T14:50:33","date_gmt":"2016-05-20T14:50:33","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/edmundprestwich.co.uk\/?p=1735"},"modified":"2016-05-21T16:48:16","modified_gmt":"2016-05-21T16:48:16","slug":"review-peter-sansom-careful-what-you-wish-for","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/edmundprestwich.co.uk\/?p=1735","title":{"rendered":"Review &#8211; Peter Sansom, Careful What You Wish For"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Carcanet Press, Alliance House, Cross St, Manchester M2 7AQ.\u00a0\u00a0 64 pp. \u00a39.99<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>The language of Sansom\u2019s poems is plain. Most of the scenes they present are very much scenes of ordinary life. Appearances are deceptive, though. In the first poem we come across this:<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 60px;\">A huge willow<br \/>\ngrows back into the current I rowboated on<br \/>\none summer forty years ago, impossible,<br \/>\nthe glass drop on the oar plunged back<br \/>\ninto the heavy green present, this moment,<br \/>\nwhen a dalmation comes startling by<br \/>\nwith its head in a vet cone like a song.<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0A lesser poet might have given \u201cimpossible\u201d an exclamation mark. Sansom tosses it away between commas, then startles us by embodying the collision of past and present in metaphors that move so swiftly from sight to touch and sight to sound that they achieve a synaesthetic fusion of the senses. Instead of reflecting in discursive terms, he makes us experience the collision for ourselves, embedding it in the texture of the writing as something we almost trip over as we read. At first we don\u2019t register the shift into the past. When we do, we seem to be looking at it the wrong way round. Wouldn\u2019t \u201cplunged back \/ into the heavy green <em>past<\/em>\u201d have been more natural? But no; we\u2019re being made to experience how the poet has been so shaken out of the present that for a moment he seems to see it from the perspective of the past. We probably all time travel like that, but it\u2019s rare to find the sensation so directly and forcefully incorporated into the way something is written.<\/p>\n<p>Trapdoors between now and then open in many of these poems. There\u2019s never a feeling of nostalgia, though, just a vivid sense of the strangeness of our life in time. Take \u201cOn a Train at Night, 1977\u201d:<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 60px;\">In the darkness the moon<br \/>\nabove the town with its lit-up spire,<br \/>\na crescent bay of streets and shops.<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 60px;\">We\u2019re the train, stopped for a minute,<br \/>\nthat someone might glance up at, a train<br \/>\noutside the station looking down<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 60px;\">at the town like a bay.<br \/>\n\u2018I\u2019m not dead yet,\u2019 the woman says,<br \/>\nlifting her plastic glass to toast me.<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 60px;\">\u2018I\u2019m eighty. That\u2019s surprised you.<br \/>\nMy boyfriend\u2019s sixty-three.\u2019 She laughs,<br \/>\n\u2018He thinks I\u2019m seventy.\u2019<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 60px;\">Moll Flanders sits between us<br \/>\nand the notes for an essay. The moon<br \/>\nmakes a little start and shunts off<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 60px;\">back the way it came, taking<br \/>\nus with it, me and the book<br \/>\nand the year and the town<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 60px;\">and the woman who is not dead yet.<\/p>\n<p>\u00a0That\u2019s enchanting for its wit, the vividness with which the woman\u2019s voice is caught, and the implicit drama of the situation in which the young man\u2019s silence plays against her uninvited familiarity. It shows Sansom\u2019s gift for working in spare strokes that set off ripples of suggestion and leave imaginative space for them to develop. Everything can be taken in different ways; even the wit shimmers from mischief to wryness as we move from the middle to the end. After a title setting the encounter so definitely in the past there\u2019s something startling about how present and alive the woman is in stanza three. Her lost and recovered vitality is one thing that makes the poem straddle time so hauntingly. Another is the ambiguity of the metaphor of the train shunting off at the end. The underlying idea is that the poet in the present watches the past recede, but the detail of the metaphor keeps one foot of our imaginations on the train, as if we were watching the <em>future<\/em> disappear. This fits with the way the \u201cme\u201d the poet identifies with in the third to last line is the person he was in 1977, not the one he is now. There\u2019s wryness in the ending, but also triumph. The woman is \u201cnot dead yet\u201d because she lives in people\u2019s memories, and in the poem. However modestly, Sansom is making large claims about the value of human life, and of art.<\/p>\n<p>In his own case the art is profoundly democratic. The distinctiveness of his poems often grows out of seemingly minor oddities in the way they\u2019re put together, oddities that make us experience common situations and emotions from peculiar angles, with a renewed sense of wonder. He has a gift for metaphors that kindle in the imagination and glow there quietly, not attracting so much attention to themselves that they arrest the onward movement of the poem, but with a beauty and suggestiveness that makes them linger in the mind, like the description of Outward Bound hikers walking through the dark \u201cwith torchlight maps for stepping stones\u201d. Writing of or to family members, of places and popular music revisited, of books and the home, there\u2019s a pervasive generosity to these poems, perhaps seen at its very best in \u201cThe Caddy\u201d. There are moving love poems, like the outstanding \u201cYou Have Been Gone a Fortnight and the House\u201d. Throughout, a sharp intelligence gives the poems a richness of suggestion that makes them play differently in the mind as you approach them from different imaginative angles, so that \u201cYou Have Been Gone a Fortnight\u201d seems a piece of lovingly humorous hyperbole on one reading and a cry of need on another. In short, this book both offers immediate pleasure and handsomely rewards rereading.<\/p>\n<p>I would like to thank Patricia Oxley for permission to reprint this review, which appeared in Acumen 84.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Carcanet Press, Alliance House, Cross St, Manchester M2 7AQ.\u00a0\u00a0 64 pp. \u00a39.99 &nbsp; The language of Sansom\u2019s poems is plain. Most of the scenes they present are very much scenes of ordinary life. Appearances are deceptive, though. 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